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Sue's avatar

This is incredibly clever and rather lovely! It has such a positive, uplifting message and optimistic ending! I loved it. Thank you, Ben!

Barb DeMoney's avatar

Really enjoyed this one, Ben. Nice job!

Penny Thompson's avatar

Ben, I’m sitting here smiling after finishing this heartwarming story, told in wonderfully clever rhyme. Love the freckle count.

Andrew Monge's avatar

Can’t get over how well this is told, especially given the rhymes throughout. Excellent work!

Vicky Heath's avatar

Such a clever concept and really well-paced 🥰

Laurie B Spellman's avatar

Absolutely beautiful 🥰. I wouldn't expect any less from you! Cheers 🎉

Rosemarie McGourty's avatar

I usually read first thing in the morning, but not today. So, now I get to end my day with this beautiful, fun and clever read! I will go off to sleep tonight with a smile

for sure. Bravo Ben! Well done!💜

Nina Miller Writes's avatar

This was so much fun, Ben! It's not often I get to read your romances! Bravo!