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Scott Ortolano's avatar

Great read! Love how the little details build tension so effectively throughout the story.

Debbi's avatar

Fabulous. I was very caught up in this short.

Penny Thompson's avatar

Although I wish we could, we can't always wrap love in a pretty package.

Janessa, you've done a great job with this story of two people who care deeply for one another, but who carry too much emotional scarring to build a healthy relationship.

Rosanne Trost's avatar

I could feel her despair.