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Joseph C Ogbonna's avatar

Wow! This is ingeniously creative!

Joseph C Ogbonna's avatar

Wow! This is ingeniously creative!

Linette Rabsatt's avatar

Beautifully done!

Sue's avatar

I love this poem. It's so imaginative and beautifully clear. Really good!

Tamara Shaffer's avatar

The idea is clever and imaginative, the metaphors delightful.

Penny Thompson's avatar

I feel the closing verse expresses the poet’s perfect love. He is offering his all.

Shilpa Chakravarty's avatar

Simple, sweet way to express is just say it....else even the Taj won't be sufficient to speak of love.... beautifully penned..👏