Is there anyone out there who was not moved by this story. Sounds real. Beautifully written using familiar phrases that we all can identify in our own lives. With delicate descriptions of the anticipated joy and sadness, the writer’s words reach the heart. Great piece of writing that I am sure the author will be proud.
A sad, moving story, beautifully told. Anna's character shone though. I normally prefer something cheerful but you handled this so well. I love that one of the swans was gone too.
Wow. Wow. I have goosebumps reading this story. So powerful. So full of emotion. So visual. It could be its own TV series from the very beginning to that heart-wrenching touching ending. What an excellent slice-of-life story. I cried for their everlasting love and the loss of it for him. So well written, Bud.
Wow, Bud, this is so emotional. I'm crying.
Thank you. It’s one of the more serious pieces I’ve written. Bud
Is there anyone out there who was not moved by this story. Sounds real. Beautifully written using familiar phrases that we all can identify in our own lives. With delicate descriptions of the anticipated joy and sadness, the writer’s words reach the heart. Great piece of writing that I am sure the author will be proud.
Thank you for the kind words. Bud
A sad, moving story, beautifully told. Anna's character shone though. I normally prefer something cheerful but you handled this so well. I love that one of the swans was gone too.
Sue, thank you.
Wow. Wow. I have goosebumps reading this story. So powerful. So full of emotion. So visual. It could be its own TV series from the very beginning to that heart-wrenching touching ending. What an excellent slice-of-life story. I cried for their everlasting love and the loss of it for him. So well written, Bud.
Thank you so much! I truly appreciate the feedback.
Wow, I have no words. This story made me cry - it's just so beautiful.
Hi Vicky, thank you for your positive comments. I typically write humorous pieces, but have tried to focus on more serious issues lately.
So powerful, so beautifully done that I am in tears! This is so so good. I want to hug all my loved ones and stay thankful for all that I have.
Thanks, Nina. Glad you liked it.
Powerful tale of love, and heartbreak💞💔
Thank you, Dawn.