Roses In Bloom
by Linette Rabsatt
The beating quietly sounds off in my chest
with yearning for you that can no longer rest.
A torching desire for a piece of your love,
only you can give me that special love.
Soak me in your warmth and affection,
hold me close to make a locked connection.
Be mine and take all of me,
open me with your love’s key.
Now is the time to make a release,
my all I surrender – piece by piece.
I’m craving for you – show me your all,
take a taste of me to make my body call.
Thirsty for your fingers’ teasing touch,
with you every moment is just enough.
Your movement like love in infinity,
such passions that bind us perfectly.
Your heart’s beating makes me bloom,
as we engage intimately under the moon.
The poem "Roses In Bloom" by Linette Rabsatt strikes a chord with my own experiences in love and longing. The speaker’s deep yearning for their beloved reminds me of the moments I've felt that same intensity—whether it was during my years in the Marine Corps, where distance and duty created a longing that was palpable, or the quieter times when I’ve reflected on relationships past. The vivid imagery and powerful metaphors evoke memories of the raw, honest emotions I've navigated as a father and a man striving to connect deeply. I appreciate the poem's authenticity, even if some explicit lines might feel a bit overwhelming to others. Overall, it’s a beautifully crafted piece that resonates with the complexities of love, reflecting the very essence of what it means to truly feel.
I enjoyed this heartfelt piece!