Wow, Michael. This is a great story, with a complexity I wasn't expecting from Miss Courtney and Davis's initial interaction. Miss Courtney's persistent questioning and Davis slow reveal of his past was nicely paced.
Thank you for this piece! A story told through dialogue would challenge my thought process but you did it so well! Pace, flow and consistent characters..so much came together here. Bravo !
Wow, Michael. This is a great story, with a complexity I wasn't expecting from Miss Courtney and Davis's initial interaction. Miss Courtney's persistent questioning and Davis slow reveal of his past was nicely paced.
Thank you for this piece! A story told through dialogue would challenge my thought process but you did it so well! Pace, flow and consistent characters..so much came together here. Bravo !
What can I say, Michael, except bravo! Great story, well told.
A cleverly told story through convincing dialogue. Well done!
Slow clap…..wonderful story!
Great tale.