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Vicky Heath's avatar

Nice one, Kayleigh!

Kayleigh K's avatar

Thanks Vicky. This was the second piece of flash I ever wrote. So chuffed to have it published.

Penny Thompson's avatar

Kayleigh, I enjoyed this story. While it's complete as is, I see it as a great hook to a longer romance tale. I would like to learn more about her past and her deceased boyfriend, and watch Rebecca's budding feelings for Adrian blossom.

Kayleigh K's avatar

Thanks Penny. Only ever saw this as a standalone piece but it’s given me something to think about. Thanks.