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Shilpa Chakravarty's avatar

So beautiful a story....I can feel the pain in her ....loved it .

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Constanza Baeza Valdenegro's avatar

Thank you so much! ☺️

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Shilpa Chakravarty's avatar

Keep penning more such stories..... I shall love to read.

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Constanza Baeza Valdenegro's avatar

Thank you so much for your kind words ☺️

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Penny Thompson's avatar

This story reads like poetry to me.

The narrator’s isolation, fledgling romance and then ultimate pain and sadness are so beautifully expressed throughout.

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Constanza Baeza Valdenegro's avatar

Thank you so much! ☺️

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Laurie B Spellman's avatar

Beautiful work. 🌟

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Constanza Baeza Valdenegro's avatar

Thank you so much! ☺️

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Danielle Cahill's avatar

This is hypnotic and just so beautiful. It captures the yearning for another soul, and for poetry, perfectly. Thank you for sharing.

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Constanza Baeza Valdenegro's avatar

Thank you so much! ☺️

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