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Elise Gilmore's avatar

Just the cutest story! ❤️

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Rachel Lawrence's avatar

Thank you, Elise!

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Bebe Maxwell's avatar

Loved it! More please. ☺️

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Rachel Lawrence's avatar

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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Katie Fitzgerald's avatar

I love this so much! 💕

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Rachel Lawrence's avatar

Thanks, Katie!

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Andrea Renae's avatar

This story is adorable! So good!

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Rachel Lawrence's avatar

Thank you!

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Emily Barnett's avatar

This was so sweet. I love Evan 😍 I need part two with them in English class now!

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Rachel Lawrence's avatar

Thanks for reading! Part two would be fun, though there aren't enough snacks in English class ;)

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Emily Barnett's avatar

Too true 😆

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Tracy Erler's avatar

Swooooon! That was adorable!

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Rachel Lawrence's avatar

Thank you, Tracy!

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Jess Mae's avatar

This is adorable!!! ❤️❤️

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Rachel Lawrence's avatar

Aw, thank you! I'm so happy you liked it!

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Vince Roman's avatar

Love this so much omg so cute!!!!

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Rachel Lawrence's avatar

Thank you so much!

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Evolet Yvaine's avatar

Cute story. I agree with everyone else. Part 2 , where she gets his number and he shows her that Nolan was SO five minutes ago. LOL

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Rachel Lawrence's avatar

Thanks! And Nolan who? ;)

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Morgan J. Manns's avatar

This story was so sweet!

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Rachel Lawrence's avatar

Thank you!! :)

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BRR Cannon's avatar

Oh my goodness! What an adorable story! Evan is a winner for sure! 😍

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Rachel Lawrence's avatar

Thanks for these kind words!

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Kelly Hellmuth's avatar

Love this Rach. 🥰🥰🥰

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Rachel Lawrence's avatar

Thank you, Kelly!

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Tamara Shaffer's avatar

This was a cute, well-written story. I liked the way the romance unfolded gradually; it took a few paragraphs to realize he would become an object of affection. The first few paragraphs were a realistic depiction of young women looking for romance.

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Rachel Lawrence's avatar

Thank you!

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Nina Miller's avatar

Love this!!

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Rachel Lawrence's avatar

I'm so happy you enjoyed!

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Kara Kahnke's avatar

This was so cute!

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Rachel Lawrence's avatar

Thank you, Kara!

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