This is a nicely-written love story with a surprise and happy ending. Not sure what happened to Duncan, though; not sure whether she was joking or whether he met a disastrous end. But, I'm happy the main guy got his love back.
A couple things, if I may:
I had gotten up early and went to the bakery
I think this should read "I had gotten up early and gone to the bakery." The "had" word carries over to modify the second verb.
Also, I wondered whether he made marchmellows or use them to make something delicious.
I love how mysterious this story is! Wonder where Duncan went 🤔
This is a nicely-written love story with a surprise and happy ending. Not sure what happened to Duncan, though; not sure whether she was joking or whether he met a disastrous end. But, I'm happy the main guy got his love back.
A couple things, if I may:
I had gotten up early and went to the bakery
I think this should read "I had gotten up early and gone to the bakery." The "had" word carries over to modify the second verb.
Also, I wondered whether he made marchmellows or use them to make something delicious.