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svndavn's avatar

I love how mysterious this story is! Wonder where Duncan went 🤔

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Tamara Shaffer's avatar

This is a nicely-written love story with a surprise and happy ending. Not sure what happened to Duncan, though; not sure whether she was joking or whether he met a disastrous end. But, I'm happy the main guy got his love back.

A couple things, if I may:

I had gotten up early and went to the bakery

I think this should read "I had gotten up early and gone to the bakery." The "had" word carries over to modify the second verb.

Also, I wondered whether he made marchmellows or use them to make something delicious.

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