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Tamara Shaffer's avatar

"My sisters think you are an affront to all we stand for ought to get to know the real you" The editing of this sentence, with "you" crossed out, there is a word missing.

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Micromance Magazine's avatar

I took that as being intentional - sort of like "erasure poetry/writing"... It's not going to be perfect... But that's just how I interpreted it *shrugs*

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Nina Miller's avatar

Delightful! I love a witch with a crush! Just hope her sisters don't crush her suitor.

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