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svndavn's avatar

This poem has a beautiful flow! I especially liked the lines “felt its rhythmic passion/a guise was given to open the euphoric”

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Joseph C Ogbonna's avatar

Brilliantly penned down. I enjoyed the flow. This is ingenious. It has the professional touch of a seasoned poet. Looking forward to seeing more and more of your poems.

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Ash Douglas's avatar

Your comment is very appreciated, thank you for reading!

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Shilpa Chakravarty's avatar

Well crafted poem.....free verse that flows with the story intended to tell.... nice piece of work , sir.

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Ash Douglas's avatar

Thank you very much for the read and that awesome comment. 👌

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