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Laurie Sibley's avatar

I really like this story. Both the concept and how it was told.

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Vicky Heath's avatar

I agree!

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Vicky Heath's avatar

OK, so two things. First, this story is so good! Is it really your first publication, Erin? If so, then wow. Second, as a former cancer cell biologist, I really appreciated the phrase "multiplied like a mitotic cell." Not something you hear everyday in romance fiction...

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Erin Oliver's avatar

Oh, that’s so kind of you to say, Vicky! Yes, I’ve just recently dipped my toe in the world of short fiction. At the time I submitted this it was my first publication, but I’ve just recently had another (very different) story published in Five on the Fifth earlier this month 😊 Appreciate your support. You are such an encouraging presence in the community, always love to see you boosting other writers up! ❤️

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Vicky Heath's avatar

Aw, thanks, Erin ❤️

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Tamara Shaffer's avatar

What a unique idea for a romance. It kept us wondering whether it would actually happen. It was a satisfying conclusion, led up to by great imagery.

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Laura Turner's avatar

I loved this story so much, Erin. Yes, former bio major here, so I agree with Vicky in loving the med relates. It's hard to believe this is your first publication! Best wishes with your novel -- welcome aboard! 💜🦋

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Debbi's avatar

Loved this: “…the warmth at its center felt real, a small, sunlit window out of this truly terrible day.”

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Ruth O'Reilly's avatar

I just loved how fantasy & reality collided in this piece! Can't wait to read more of your writing Erin 😊

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June Linscott's avatar

Really like this story, Erin. Well done for something different.

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