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svndavn's avatar

I love how you describe the main character’s emotions! Especially in these lines: “Those kicks cause my stomach to flutter, a billion bumble bees taking flight inside my being. A warmth spreads, like honey dripping from an imaginary hive.”

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Magz's avatar

Most excellent Kim .. bravo 🥰

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The Baby's avatar

This line made me whoosh.

where Kate and I danced in the waves until dawn kissed the ocean

You have a gift dear sister.

Love, The Baby

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Lily Moon's avatar

Wow great writing...

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