by Sheila Thadani
So beautifully whimsical and intricate. Emotional impressions like these are why I love Valentine's Day ^_^
Sorry I received this only today, Thank you very much!
I appreciate this poem. You've done an excellent job of putting into words the feeling of being in love, something I've wished I could articulate. One thing, though, "It's exilir" and "It's sojourn" should be "Its" -- no apostrophe.
Thanks so much!
I really loved the rhymes in this poem. These lines might be my favorite: “Shackled to the walls of its addiction/To escape life’s imperfections.”
Thank you!
So beautifully whimsical and intricate. Emotional impressions like these are why I love Valentine's Day ^_^
Sorry I received this only today, Thank you very much!
I appreciate this poem. You've done an excellent job of putting into words the feeling of being in love, something I've wished I could articulate. One thing, though, "It's exilir" and "It's sojourn" should be "Its" -- no apostrophe.
Thanks so much!
I really loved the rhymes in this poem. These lines might be my favorite: “Shackled to the walls of its addiction/To escape life’s imperfections.”
Thank you!