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Tamara Shaffer's avatar

I appreciate this poem. You've done an excellent job of putting into words the feeling of being in love, something I've wished I could articulate. One thing, though, "It's exilir" and "It's sojourn" should be "Its" -- no apostrophe.

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svndavn's avatar

I really loved the rhymes in this poem. These lines might be my favorite: “Shackled to the walls of its addiction/To escape life’s imperfections.”

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