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svndavn's avatar

Jaw dropping ending 😲

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Micromance Magazine's avatar

It's a good one!

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Tamara Shaffer's avatar

The story was so well written and had excellent dialogue; great, unexpected ending. One thing, though, the apostrophe is in the wrong place here: "Tears fell down the girls’ face..." It should be "girl's" as it's singular.

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