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Tamara Shaffer's avatar

This story is nicely intertwined with poetry and literature.

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Katie Fitzgerald's avatar

Thank you!

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Laurie Sibley's avatar

Yes! The perfect lines of poetry—which is saying a lot, knowing you’ve got such a tight word count to work with. 💗

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Katie Fitzgerald's avatar

Thanks, Laurie! It was fun trying to find public domain poems that would suit the story. I'm glad you think they worked well!

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Rachel Lawrence's avatar

Love these characters and all the poetry references!

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Katie Fitzgerald's avatar

Thanks, Rachel!

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Sue's avatar

Lovely story, Katie! Appealing characters and interesting blend of poetry which fitted in perfectly. It kept my interest right through.

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Katie Fitzgerald's avatar

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Elise Gilmore's avatar

This was a beautiful story! Your love of poetry definitely shines through Spencer and Annabel.

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Katie Fitzgerald's avatar

Thank you, Elise!

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June Linscott's avatar

I live how a life can turn around on a sixpence. I'm intrigued to know how old they are. Beautiful story. Thank you.

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Katie Fitzgerald's avatar

Thank you so much! I imagined them as late 30s/early 40s.

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Bill Ferguson 🇨🇦's avatar

I quite enjoyed the interplay between Annabel and Spencer. Well done!

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Katie Fitzgerald's avatar

Thanks very much!

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Lori J Muniz's avatar

i can always picture the characters in my mind, enjoy your writing so much

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